Ode to The No Name Paper
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what have you done to have been abandoned
by your owner, your author, your maker?
days go by and there is no taker
Were they lazy?
Or ashamed?
How would you feel if you'd never been named?
Oh, No Name Paper,
For days you go unclaimed,
unaltered, unbothered, unnamed.
And after weeks of solitude,
And never once being viewed,
Out of the teacher's frustration,
You reach your final destination.
The trash.
R.I.P No Name Paper
You meet the emotional requirement, but i have no idea which requirement you didn't have
ReplyDeleteYou need an emotional and recognizable emotion. Stanza form and figurative language. (Matt)
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ReplyDeleteYou have gotten emotion,but you didn't get the Figurative Language I think.
ReplyDelete(Malik Jeffery)
I take that back you really have everything there is in an Ode.
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You have met all of the requirements.
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ReplyDeleteThis ode met the emotional and recognizable emotion. Used forms of figurative language and was used in the correct stanza form.
ReplyDeleteYou did the beginning correct with the Oh,No Name Paper, and you personified the paper. You also have a rhyme scheme. It is also in stanza format. I don't see any requirements you did not meet.
ReplyDeleteYou started the Ode with the Oh, no name paper. You also used personification, and there is a rhyme scheme, and It is in stanzas. You used emotion in the Ode. You met all of the requirements
ReplyDeleteYou met the requirements of having a recognizable rhyme scheme, emotional vocabulary, and stanza form. You forgot to include figurative language.
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ReplyDeleteyou did everything, but having a figurative language included.
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ReplyDeleteYou meet most requirements, you had a... recognizable rhyme scheme, emotional vocabulary, a stanza form but you did not use figurative language.
ReplyDeleteYou have the emotional vocabulary, recognizable rhyme scheme, and it is in stanza form, but what you lack is figurative language.
ReplyDeleteYou met the recognizable rhyme scheme, emotional vocabulary, and stanzas. You didn't use figurative language.
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ReplyDeleteYou started the Ode with the Oh, no name paper. You also used personification, and there is a rhyme scheme, and It is in stanzas. You used emotion in the Ode. You met all of the requirements
ReplyDeleteYou have met your emotional requirement, but i do not think you reached your figurative lang. requirement(Mari)
ReplyDeleteYou meet most requirements, you had a... recognizable rhyme scheme, emotional vocabulary, a stanza form but you did not use figurative language.
ReplyDeleteyou used emotion, stanza form, and figurative language
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ReplyDeleteyou used rhyme scheme, figurative language, and you put it in stanza form. I think you met all the requirements in my opinion.
ReplyDeletei forgot to say that you also used emotion
DeleteYou met the recognizable rhyme scheme, emotional vocabulary, and stanzas. You didn't use figurative language.
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DeleteYou used all of the requirements like rhyme scheme, and figurative language.
ReplyDeleteYou have a rhyme scheme however you have no figurative language. - Ambria
ReplyDeleteyou met your requirements with the rhyme scheme, and stanzas.
ReplyDeleteYou used rhyme Scheme, figurative language, and stanzas format. I believe you met all of the requirements.
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DeleteKaysun ManivongApril 19, 2016 at 7:20 AM
DeleteThe Ode had rhyme scheme,emotion,and stanzas.So, I think that it has met all of the requirements.
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Megan BailliezApril 19, 2016 at 7:21 AM
You used all the requirements for instance, rhyme scheme, stanzas, emotional vocabulary,
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AnonymousApril 19, 2016 at 7:21 AM
you have met all your requirements for you ode and the rhyme schemes and all
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franky lugardoApril 19, 2016 at 7:21 AM
1.)you have used a rhyme scheme
2.)you used emotional vocabulary
3.)you put it in stanza form
4.)and you used figurative language
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Sidney WaldenApril 19, 2016 at 7:21 AM
You met the requirements of using emotion, figurative language, and a rhyme scheme.
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Samuel N.April 19, 2016 at 7:21 AM
You forgot to talk to the audience about the No Name Paper, and chose to talk to it throughout most of the ode. Other than that, you meet all the requirements.
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Jefte PerezApril 19, 2016 at 7:25 AM
You met the recognizable rhyme scheme, emotional vocabulary, and stanzas. You didn't use figurative language.
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Lane SprouseApril 19, 2016 at 7:26 AM
the ode has a rhyme scheme because all of the stanzas have the last two lines that rhyme. you had emotional vocab such as abandoned, ashamed lazy.
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Hunter NolandApril 19, 2016 at 7:55 AM
Figurative language is missing.
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Seth LewisApril 19, 2016 at 8:15 AM
You met rhyme scheme, but didn't meet Figurative Language.
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Dereshia BenfordApril 19, 2016 at 8:17 AM
You had a rhyme scheme and you have them in stanzas. The thing that you didn't do is use figurative language.
You have correctly met the requirements for emotion, rhyme scheme, and stanza form, but I did not see any figurative language.
ReplyDeleteYou did meet the requirements for a good ode. You used good rhyme schemes, good language, and you used stanzas. Good job.
ReplyDeleteYou used emotion, rhyme scheme, stanza form, and figurative language. You included all of the requirements.
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ReplyDeleteRhyme Scheme, Figurative Language and emotion so you have met all the requirements.
ReplyDeleteThe Ode had rhyme scheme,emotion,and stanzas.So, I think that it has met all of the requirements.
ReplyDeleteYou used all the requirements for instance, rhyme scheme, stanzas, emotional vocabulary,
ReplyDeleteyou have met all your requirements for you ode and the rhyme schemes and all
ReplyDelete1.)you have used a rhyme scheme
ReplyDelete2.)you used emotional vocabulary
3.)you put it in stanza form
4.)and you used figurative language
You met the requirements of using emotion, figurative language, and a rhyme scheme.
ReplyDeleteYou forgot to talk to the audience about the No Name Paper, and chose to talk to it throughout most of the ode. Other than that, you meet all the requirements.
ReplyDeleteYou met the recognizable rhyme scheme, emotional vocabulary, and stanzas. You didn't use figurative language.
ReplyDeletethe ode has a rhyme scheme because all of the stanzas have the last two lines that rhyme. you had emotional vocab such as abandoned, ashamed lazy.
ReplyDeleteFigurative language is missing.
ReplyDeleteYou met rhyme scheme, but didn't meet Figurative Language.
ReplyDeleteYou had a rhyme scheme and you have them in stanzas. The thing that you didn't do is use figurative language.
ReplyDeleteemotional statements, somewhat of a rhyme scheme, stanza form, but it is not very long
ReplyDeleteYou used Rhyme Scheme , Emotion and Vocabulary. Therefore, you met all the requirements for an Ode.
ReplyDeleteYou used emotion with your words and had a rhyme scheme. You forgot to include figurative language though.
ReplyDeleteYou need an noticeable emotion.
ReplyDeleteThere is a rhyme scheme and it is emotional. There is no figurative language.
ReplyDeleteYou met all the requirements. You have a rhyme scheme, emotional vocabulary, and it is in stanza form.You also have personification for your figurative language when you say that the paper has reached its final destination.
ReplyDeleteYou have a rhyme scheme and emotional vocabulary; however, you are missing figurative language.
ReplyDeleteyou included emotional vocabulary and a rhyme scheme. The use of figurative language was forgotten.
ReplyDeleteYou met the rhyme scheme,and good emotional vocabulary , but you are missing figurative language.
ReplyDeleteRhyme Scheme;stayed on topic;wasn't short; by JORDAN
ReplyDeleteYou pretty much met all the standards but except the figurative language.
ReplyDeleteYou met the rhyme scheme, stanzas, and use of emotional feelings, but you forgot figurative language.
ReplyDeleteyou had good a rhyme scheme and you showed emotion you showed all the requirements.
ReplyDeleteYou met the requirements of having a rhyme scheme, emotional context(ashamed, solitude, R.I.P, etc). You also had figurative language and it looks like you met all the requirements.
ReplyDeleterhyme scheme and some figurative language like when you have never been named
ReplyDeleteYou did good with the rhyme. The thing you should work on is a use of proper language.
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ReplyDeleteThere was a rhyme scheme, but there was no figurative language.
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You have rhyme scheme and emotional vocabulary but no figurative language.
ReplyDeleteyou met the requirement of having stanzas but,you didn't meet the requirement of figurative language
ReplyDeleteYou used some rhyme scheme, but you did not use stuff like alliteration and repetition. You only used one example of personification.
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ReplyDelete(Jamar) You got the rhyme scheme and the stanzas
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You had your rhyme scheme and enough stanzas but you didn't have the figurative language that you needed.
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ReplyDeleteThere is rhyming in the stanzas but little to no figurative language.
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DeleteYou have rhyme scheme and emotional vocabulary but no figurative language.
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DeleteYou had rhyme scheme but at the end you did not put the Oh, No name paper at the end.
ReplyDeleteYOU HAD ALL THE REQUIREMENTS BESIDES A RHYME SCHEME (HAYDEN BLACK).
ReplyDeleteTHANK YOU
DeleteYoure wierd
Deleteyou had rhyme scheme but you didnt use things like alliteration.
ReplyDeleteYou used rhyme scheme and stanzas but no figurative language.
ReplyDeleteneeds figurative language ,a rhyme scheme, and needs more emotions.
ReplyDeleteyou should work on your figurative language..... but you did good with rhyme (Aiden Hobbit)
ReplyDeleteYou met the requirements of having a rhyme scheme, emotional vocabulary, and the stanza form, but you forgot to include figurative language.
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ReplyDeleteYou have rhyme scheme,repetition,and emotional vocabulary;however, you are missing figurative language.
ReplyDeleteYou have rhyme scheme and put emotion into your ode, but you didn't use alliteration and little to none figurative language.
ReplyDeleteYou showed your emotion through your repetition, however, i did not notice any figurative language in your poem. On the other hand, your poem did have rhyme scheme and multiple stanzas, so overall it was well written.
ReplyDeleteyou have a rhyme scheme
ReplyDeleteYou really need to put figurative language into your poem.
ReplyDeleteYou have met the requirements for emotion, rhyme scheme, and stanza form; however,I did not see any figurative language.
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Deleteyou did just fine you used the good ryhme scheme and other things
ReplyDeleteRhyme scheme is ok{laughing face emoji}
ReplyDeleteYou didn't use alliteration but you used rhyme scheme
ReplyDeleteYou have rhyme scheme and emotional vocabulary but no figurative language.
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ReplyDeleteYou used rhyme scheme and stanzas but no figurative language.
ReplyDeleteYou used a rhyme scheme and repetition, however you didn't use alliteration. Cole Mayo
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DeleteYou meet the requirements of having a rhyme scheme and emotion, but you didn't really add figurative language.
ReplyDeleteYou met all the requirements. You have a rhyme scheme, emotional vocabulary, and it is in stanza form.You also have personification for your figurative language when you say that the paper has reached its final destination.
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ReplyDeletejd...April 19, 2016 at 9:17 AM
You have rhyme scheme and emotional vocabulary but no figurative language.
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AnonymousApril 19, 2016 at 9:18 AM
no jd
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Mackenzie PooleApril 19, 2016 at 9:18 AM
You had rhyme scheme but at the end you did not put the Oh, No name paper at the end.
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AnonymousApril 19, 2016 at 9:18 AM
YOU HAD ALL THE REQUIREMENTS BESIDES A RHYME SCHEME (HAYDEN BLACK).
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AnonymousApril 19, 2016 at 9:19 AM
THANK YOU
AnonymousApril 19, 2016 at 9:19 AM
Youre wierd
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jordanApril 19, 2016 at 9:18 AM
you had rhyme scheme but you didnt use things like alliteration.
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haley byrdApril 19, 2016 at 9:19 AM
You used rhyme scheme and stanzas but no figurative language.
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AnonymousApril 19, 2016 at 9:19 AM
needs figurative language ,a rhyme scheme, and needs more emotions.
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AnonymousApril 19, 2016 at 9:19 AM
you should work on your figurative language..... but you did good with rhyme (Aiden Hobbit)
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Yesenia BravoApril 19, 2016 at 9:19 AM
You met the requirements of having a rhyme scheme, emotional vocabulary, and the stanza form, but you forgot to include figurative language.
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Kevin ColindresApril 19, 2016 at 9:19 AM
You meet most requirements, you had a... recognizable rhyme scheme, emotional vocabulary, a stanza form but you did not use figurative language. (▀̿Ĺ̯▀̿ ̿)
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Pragya JhaApril 19, 2016 at 9:20 AM
You have rhyme scheme,repetition,and emotional vocabulary;however, you are missing figurative language.
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HAILEY KELLYApril 19, 2016 at 9:20 AM
You have rhyme scheme and put emotion into your ode, but you didn't use alliteration and little to none figurative language.
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iyana granthamApril 19, 2016 at 9:20 AM
You showed your emotion through your repetition, however, i did not notice any figurative language in your poem. On the other hand, your poem did have rhyme scheme and multiple stanzas, so overall it was well written.
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Justin GarciaApril 19, 2016 at 9:20 AM
you have a rhyme scheme
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KalebApril 19, 2016 at 9:21 AM
You really need to put figurative language into your poem.
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quierraApril 19, 2016 at 9:21 AM
You have met the requirements for emotion, rhyme scheme, and stanza form; however,I did not see any figurative language.
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AnonymousApril 19, 2016 at 9:49 AM
so formal
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tyler pruittApril 19, 2016 at 9:21 AM
you did just fine you used the good ryhme scheme and other things
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AnonymousApril 19, 2016 at 9:22 AM
Rhyme scheme is ok{laughing face emoji}
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Devianna Oum (@yogirlwce_)April 19, 2016 at 9:22 AM
You didn't use alliteration but you used rhyme scheme
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bryson givensApril 19, 2016 at 11:17 AM
You have rhyme scheme and emotional vocabulary but no figurative language.
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AnonymousApril 19, 2016 at 11:17 AM
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joeycarriganApril 19, 2016 at 11:17 AM
You used rhyme scheme and stanzas but no figurative language.
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Steve Irwin is the bestApril 19, 2016 at 11:17 AM
You used a rhyme scheme and repetition, however you didn't use alliteration. Cole Mayo
there was lots of good rhyme scheme and the good use of alliteration but other than that there was no figurative language
ReplyDeleteYou had rhyme scheme but you did not use things like figurative language.
ReplyDeleteYou used rhyme scheme and stanzas, but you did not use figurative language.
ReplyDeleteeverything but figurative language is there
ReplyDeleteThe ode has a rhyme scheme, personification, and it does show examples of repetition and alliteration and feeling, but you could've used more repetition or alliteration. (By: Claire Harris)
ReplyDelete(Kelenicia Moore) The requirements emotion, rhyme scheme, and stanzas are met.
ReplyDeleteyou did rhyme scheme and emotion but you need figurative language
ReplyDeleteyou had good rhyme scheme and, repetition but lacked other figurative language.
ReplyDeletereally cole
ReplyDeleteThis is a great ode. You have one part where you used repetition, also the rhyme scheme did follow a certain pattern.
ReplyDeleteYou did well in meeting the requirements for the Ode. You have a rhyme scheme, emotion, and you did stanza form.
ReplyDeleteYes, you have met all requirements. You used rhyme scheme, stanza form ,rhyme scheme, figurative language, and emotion,
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ReplyDeleteYou used Rhyme Scheme, but you did not use a lot of figurative language( Taylor Buena)
ReplyDeleteYou have rhyme scheme and emotion, also you have stanzas. You did not use figurative language. Kristian l.
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ReplyDeleteKevin ColindresApril 19, 2016 at 9:19 AM
You meet most requirements, you had a... recognizable rhyme scheme, emotional vocabulary, a stanza form but you did not use figurative language. (▀̿Ĺ̯▀̿ ̿)
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Pragya JhaApril 19, 2016 at 9:20 AM
You have rhyme scheme,repetition,and emotional vocabulary;however, you are missing figurative language.
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HAILEY KELLYApril 19, 2016 at 9:20 AM
You have rhyme scheme and put emotion into your ode, but you didn't use alliteration and little to none figurative language.
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iyana granthamApril 19, 2016 at 9:20 AM
You showed your emotion through your repetition, however, i did not notice any figurative language in your poem. On the other hand, your poem did have rhyme scheme and multiple stanzas, so overall it was well written.
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Justin GarciaApril 19, 2016 at 9:20 AM
you have a rhyme scheme
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KalebApril 19, 2016 at 9:21 AM
You really need to put figurative language into your poem.
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quierraApril 19, 2016 at 9:21 AM
You have met the requirements for emotion, rhyme scheme, and stanza form; however,I did not see any figurative language.
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AnonymousApril 19, 2016 at 9:49 AM
so formal
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tyler pruittApril 19, 2016 at 9:21 AM
you did just fine you used the good ryhme scheme and other things
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AnonymousApril 19, 2016 at 9:22 AM
Rhyme scheme is ok{laughing face emoji}
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Devianna Oum (@yogirlwce_)April 19, 2016 at 9:22 AM
You didn't use alliteration but you used rhyme scheme
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bryson givensApril 19, 2016 at 11:17 AM
You have rhyme scheme and emotional vocabulary but no figurative language.
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AnonymousApril 19, 2016 at 11:17 AM
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joeycarriganApril 19, 2016 at 11:17 AM
You used rhyme scheme and stanzas but no figurative language.
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Steve Irwin is the bestApril 19, 2016 at 11:17 AM
You used a rhyme scheme and repetition, however you didn't use alliteration. Cole Mayo
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kenzie bApril 19, 2016 at 11:20 AM
there was lots of good rhyme scheme and the good use of alliteration but other than that there was no figurative language
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Elijah SmithApril 19, 2016 at 11:20 AM
You had rhyme scheme but you did not use things like figurative language.
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kaylea winton:)April 19, 2016 at 11:20 AM
You used rhyme scheme and stanzas, but you did not use figurative language.
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katelyn bApril 19, 2016 at 11:20 AM
everything but figurative language is there
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AnonymousApril 19, 2016 at 11:21 AM
The ode has a rhyme scheme, personification, and it does show examples of repetition and alliteration and feeling, but you could've used more repetition or alliteration. (By: Claire Harris)
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AnonymousApril 19, 2016 at 11:21 AM
(Kelenicia Moore) The requirements emotion, rhyme scheme, and stanzas are met.
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Alex MiluApril 19, 2016 at 11:21 AM
you did rhyme scheme and emotion but you need figurative language
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jaden bouknightApril 19, 2016 at 11:21 AM
you had good rhyme scheme and, repetition but lacked other figurative language.
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AnonymousApril 19, 2016 at 11:21 AM
really cole
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Kaleb Baker aka spicy pizzaApril 19, 2016 at 11:21 AM
This is a great ode. You have one part where you used repetition, also the rhyme scheme did follow a certain pattern.
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Myia TrotterApril 19, 2016 at 11:22 AM
You did well in meeting the requirements for the Ode. You have a rhyme scheme, emotion, and you did stanza form.
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Ryan TranApril 19, 2016 at 11:22 AM
Yes, you have met all requirements. You used rhyme scheme, stanza form ,rhyme scheme, figurative language, and emotion,
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Kaleb Baker aka spicy pizzaApril 19, 2016 at 11:23 AM
THAT IS A CREEPY PICTURE!!!
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